What a wonderful Valentines Day poem, belated? Well I think Im a little late in ready this..hehe
As always you've written...you've expressed...you've captured...PERFECTLY!!!!!
Holy . Crap .
This is exactly what happened with me and the guy I like . I love this , it's wonderfully written and I relate to it so well . Thank you for requesting me to read it . You brightened my day (:
Rare to find an un-Valentine done so very well, and without a hint of the bitter or the snark :) Not there's anything inherently wrong with bitter snark, mind you...
Your writing is always so skillful, so evocative - But the thing that really sets it apart, at least for me, is the glimpses of wisdom, truth, and hope that slip through what you write. A heart that has seen its share of battering, but never closes.
A wonderful tribute to V Day! Your words explode into a cascade of beauty, my heart launched into a project of anticipation and desire reading this Allen! Most excellent!
I'm not a fan of valentine day. If love is in a life. Best be kind and generous everyday of a life. Poem spoke in honest and strong words.
"V-Day arriving, and leaving without me
swimming with shellfish and sharks at sea."
Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote
I love ocen anything. (respect it and love it) Heart Day can leave anyone in its wake... :) This was beautiful and has a gorgeous scenery to the words. (hope that made sense) They are just placed well and follow along with beauty. Thank you for sharing.. :)
I'm a poet, a singer, a peaceful gunslinger..
looking to share my poetry..and a little bit of me...if I dare
I 've been writing since I was 18.... am slightly older now, and still trying to fin.. more..