V-Day, Belated

V-Day, Belated

A Poem by Allen Smuckler











Anatomically sound, befitting a king

swaying alertly in the waves, I sing.

Hearts, at sea, floundering and pounding

against the cavity of my chest, astounding.

 

V-Day arriving, and leaving without me

swimming with shellfish and sharks at sea.

Satisfying love’s unique quality,

and breathlessly waiting for me to be we.

 

Tortuously lying in the keel’s utter mist

waves exploding above, below and amidst.

contemplating all that I ever wished,

remembering when, at first we last kissed.

 

V-Day, a special enchanting display,

lovingly speeding, though slightly astray.

Wishing you love in a happiness way,

throughout a belated Valentine’s Day.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

February 15, 2009

© 2012 Allen Smuckler


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Allen Smuckler
written: February 15, 2009

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What a wonderful Valentines Day poem, belated? Well I think Im a little late in ready this..hehe
As always you've written...you've expressed...you've captured...PERFECTLY!!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Holy . Crap .
This is exactly what happened with me and the guy I like . I love this , it's wonderfully written and I relate to it so well . Thank you for requesting me to read it . You brightened my day (:

Posted 12 Years Ago


Rare to find an un-Valentine done so very well, and without a hint of the bitter or the snark :) Not there's anything inherently wrong with bitter snark, mind you...

Your writing is always so skillful, so evocative - But the thing that really sets it apart, at least for me, is the glimpses of wisdom, truth, and hope that slip through what you write. A heart that has seen its share of battering, but never closes.

Beautiful, really~

Posted 12 Years Ago


meaningful and reflective.

Posted 12 Years Ago


The best tribute I've read so far for V-Day! You got talent and I'm very proud to say good job! :)

~Lizzy~

Posted 12 Years Ago


A wonderful tribute to V Day! Your words explode into a cascade of beauty, my heart launched into a project of anticipation and desire reading this Allen! Most excellent!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Superb write...better late than never hehe

Posted 12 Years Ago


I'm not a fan of valentine day. If love is in a life. Best be kind and generous everyday of a life. Poem spoke in honest and strong words.
"V-Day arriving, and leaving without me
swimming with shellfish and sharks at sea."
Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very nice sentiments. My Valentine's was toasted, I was sick. And the kids had crisis that wouldn't wait another day. Sooo, I can relate. lol

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love ocen anything. (respect it and love it) Heart Day can leave anyone in its wake... :) This was beautiful and has a gorgeous scenery to the words. (hope that made sense) They are just placed well and follow along with beauty. Thank you for sharing.. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Allen Smuckler
Allen Smuckler

Sarasota, FL



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I'm a poet, a singer, a peaceful gunslinger.. looking to share my poetry..and a little bit of me...if I dare I 've been writing since I was 18.... am slightly older now, and still trying to fin.. more..

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