Asea

Asea

A Poem by Allen Smuckler

 




























floundering souls


searching for the essence


in the sea of humanity,


for what is important,


has meaning, and matters.


 

It is we who care for us


and help those who


can't help themselves...



 

or something like that…

 

Asea



 

That's how my poetry 


comes to be...

 

 

 

 

 

© 2012 Allen Smuckler


Author's Note

Allen Smuckler
Written: September 7, 2010
Photo: Key West, FL (February 1, 2011)

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Beautiful sentiments. Loved the flow and after glow. I can almost feel the breeze ...and what a wonderful message, help those who can not help themselves. Loved it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Hehe I like the photo. Meaningful and beautiful write in such a nice space of words. I really like this and am really enjoying how you use actual photos in your work. It's like showing many worlds all at once with your writing, all the better. Nice.

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is a poignant statement about human beings. we still have the ability to be kind to one another, show compassion. a very nice poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Such a profound movment of words that delves deep into our human experience... flowing sometimes together.. sometimes apart... May your poetry ever flow strong, my friend.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Cool. Very nice thoughts and words penned. A very good poem. Nice!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Allen writes not only excellent texts he is a great poet as well.What I think is really jaw-dropping is the line...or something like that.It throws into question the lines before but at the same time makes them even more true.Really good.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Good questions are raised in the poem. Life become more question with each day of life. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


I can say with all my heart that is a special write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sometimes a touch of colour paints a masterpiece .. and this is what your words have done. So very true - thoughtful, touching, sincere, beautiful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


'searching for the essence

in the sea of humanity,
'

we reach out a hand to those less fortunate. i liked your musings here :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Allen Smuckler
Allen Smuckler

Sarasota, FL



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I'm a poet, a singer, a peaceful gunslinger.. looking to share my poetry..and a little bit of me...if I dare I 've been writing since I was 18.... am slightly older now, and still trying to fin.. more..

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