Asea

 

floundering souls


searching for the essence


in the sea of humanity,


for what is important,


has meaning, and matters.


 

It is we who care for us


and help those who


can't help themselves...



 

or something like that…

 

Asea



 

That's how my poetry 


comes to be...

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Written: September 7, 2010
Photo: Key West, FL (February 1, 2011)

Reviews

[Becky C Strukamp]

Beautiful sentiments. Loved the flow and after glow. I can almost feel the breeze ...and what a wonderful message, help those who can not help themselves. Loved it.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Hehe I like the photo. Meaningful and beautiful write in such a nice space of words. I really like this and am really enjoying how you use actual photos in your work. It's like showing many worlds all at once with your writing, all the better. Nice.

[Mockingbird]

this is a poignant statement about human beings. we still have the ability to be kind to one another, show compassion. a very nice poem.

[An owl on the moon]

Such a profound movment of words that delves deep into our human experience... flowing sometimes together.. sometimes apart... May your poetry ever flow strong, my friend.

[Eric Cox]

Cool. Very nice thoughts and words penned. A very good poem. Nice!

[Leslie Philibert]

Allen writes not only excellent texts he is a great poet as well.What I think is really jaw-dropping is the line...or something like that.It throws into question the lines before but at the same time makes them even more true.Really good.

[Coyote Poetry]

Good questions are raised in the poem. Life become more question with each day of life. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Raven Starhawk]

I can say with all my heart that is a special write.

[emmajoy]

Sometimes a touch of colour paints a masterpiece .. and this is what your words have done. So very true - thoughtful, touching, sincere, beautiful.

[asdarkeyesclose]

'searching for the essence

in the sea of humanity,
'

we reach out a hand to those less fortunate. i liked your musings here :)