The Hippy Boy
A Poem by
Allen Smuckler
Peace...Love....and Happiness...
Woodstock Nation
We
stopped in the
whispy city,
the hippy boy and me.
We thought of the
good times and bad,
and encouraged our minds
to be free.
We
came upon a drifter
a dirty old man and
his wife.
We never felt the distance,
and imagined their life
without strife.
But
where can we be
today
alone in our world
side by side.
We thought about
loving good times,
so great, and yet
we cried.
Reenter the crispy-
like city,
snow covered,
serene & oblique.
We wandered around
with no purpose,
an oasis that just
sprung a leak.
And
who never fought
the war,
the angular, meaningless
scourge.
We found all the cities
amuck,
yet all we could say
was good luck.
So
who never sang
the song,
that glorious, soulful
olio.
Just me and that young
hippy boy,
While nobody else
really cared.
While nobody else
sang for joy.
© 2011 Allen Smuckler
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Author's Note
written: January 7, 2001
photo: Chesapeake Bay Blues Festival: May 16-17 2009
Reviews
This is absolutely beautiful I love the imagery.
Posted 12 Years Ago
the only thing i know about that era is the music, and the hippie culture i know from various clips and footage during the years. it feels like the characters are in a kind of limbo, but at least they had each other.
Posted 13 Years Ago
the only thing i know about that era is the music, and the hippie culture i know from various clips and footage during the years. it feels like the characters are in a kind of limbo, but at least they had each other.
It can be relaxing. I like this, and this part here:
"But where can we be
today
alone in our world
side by side.
We thought about
loving good times,
so great, and yet
we cried."
Posted 13 Years Ago
It can be relaxing. I like this, and this part here:
"But where can we be
today
alone in our world
side by side.
We thought about
loving good times,
so great, and yet
we cried."
I love hippies.
Posted 13 Years Ago
I love hippies.
Life without a goal or purpose we all know this as it is the nexus of teenage life lol
Posted 13 Years Ago
Life without a goal or purpose we all know this as it is the nexus of teenage life lol
Nice. A story well told. I have also found cities to be amuck.
Yours truly,
Aging "Hippy Boy"
Posted 13 Years Ago
Nice. A story well told. I have also found cities to be amuck.
Yours truly,
Aging "Hippy Boy"
Wonderful poem Allen. What we witness along our journeys in life and those memories that stay with us ...lovely poem.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Wonderful poem Allen. What we witness along our journeys in life and those memories that stay with us ...lovely poem.
Hippy Days....sure from the footage and stuff I read seemed
very exciting....
Love the free flowing poem, takes me to that era :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
Hippy Days....sure from the footage and stuff I read seemed
very exciting....
Love the free flowing poem, takes me to that era :)
What happen to the people who hated Vietnam? Now I hear whispers from the old Poet's and singers. I like your story. I have sat on four continent with people of all races, beliefs and color. We wanted the same. One peaceful day. We held dreams for a peaceful world for our children. Need a revolution of peace and healing. Need medicine and food for this world. I wish to find a hippy friend and look for a good place to rest. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote
Posted 13 Years Ago
What happen to the people who hated Vietnam? Now I hear whispers from the old Poet's and singers. I like your story. I have sat on four continent with people of all races, beliefs and color. We wanted the same. One peaceful day. We held dreams for a peaceful world for our children. Need a revolution of peace and healing. Need medicine and food for this world. I wish to find a hippy friend and look for a good place to rest. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote
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Allen Smuckler Sarasota, FL
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I'm a poet, a singer, a peaceful gunslinger..
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