Good Night (haiku)

The giant puffs of

gray clouds show the rays of sun-

brightly shining through

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

written: November 10, 1969
revised: June 15, 2009
Photo: Naples, FL (January 10, 2010)

Reviews

[Tasha]

Beautiful as always Allen and so is the picture.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[?]

Beautiful
and is the photo

[Inyourshadow]

Love the simple truths spoken so within this haiku, clouds so beautifully frame the risen morn. Keep em' coming

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

Beautiful Allen as always. xx

[Becky C Strukamp]

Beautiful words, beautiful picture, make a beautiful poem. Beautiful poem!!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Not an expert on Haiku's but this is a beautiful Haiku, goes with pic pefectly as well :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful photo and words. Best days of my life was drinking with friends watching the sun fade into the sea. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[deeps]

Such a beautiful haiku.
Love the photo it's very lovely as well.