Good Night (haiku)

The giant puffs of

gray clouds show the rays of sun-

brightly shining through

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

written: November 10, 1969
revised: June 15, 2009
Photo: Naples, FL (January 10, 2010)

Reviews

[Marie Harrison]

Ah...beautiful!

[Dewella~Vintella]

Short and sweet and elegantly beautiful. I always love reading pieces like this, because it amazes me how much imagery and emotion can be put into such a small package.

Beautiful and wondrous. ^^

Vinny~

[Sunni Davis]

I love this! Its so simple and bright. I can't help but to smile wide as I read it.

[VelvetRosetta]

Light shall always prevail, I love this!

[Mark]

We are profited to observe that brightness and darkness are cyclical by their very nature, and it matters not a whit how more numerous the obfuscating and darkening objects are, the brightness soon to come will swiftly burn them off, leaving glorious beauty in their wake!

[Brad]

"happy clouds"....LOL!
not a big fan of the haiku...but this place and it's writers are changing my view

[Muse]

I love Puffy Clouds! Thanks for making me smile. :)

[Sukriti Suki]

Nice!

[Judy Ponceby]

Lovely sunset/rise described in beautiful words.

[Lily Mae]

This is beautifully said and left me with that heart felt glow.. I love it..x