Wow! I was a bit confused at first, but then it flowed, I could understand the depth of that structure as I read the poem, and its connotation expressed perfectly through that helpless feeling, and being confused and lost. This poem has taken expressions to a much greater level, this is so unique. And now it all makes sense, including the picture, and I don't know if you meant to do that, but perhaps you were trying to make the structure of the poem vaguely outline that picture? Literally? I'm very amazed by the amount of talent you possess, this is very unique and flawlessly accentuates that (he)lple(ss) feeling!
I had to read that one twice to figure out the wording...THAT WAS NEAT!!! I was actually "Help(less)" in understanding how you did that...but I soooo did not give up the quest..lol You teach me new ways of expression everytime you RR me to read a piece. This message is so loud and clear once you figure out the wording used. I like how it makes you WANT to figure it out, makes you HAVE to figure it out, makes you MUCH more than you were before you read it...Thank you for the RR :)
I'm a poet, a singer, a peaceful gunslinger..
looking to share my poetry..and a little bit of me...if I dare
I 've been writing since I was 18.... am slightly older now, and still trying to fin.. more..