That's wonderful, so descriptive i was practically there with you .. love the counting of the raindrops, plus, closed my eyes to see the snakey road and the snail-like car ..
This is a happy write, a memory that, like medicine, should be taken at least once a month! Age is just a number, remember?!
Seeking merely to follow the Sun, and does it co-operate? NOT! Just runs and hides beneath the clouds...or perhaps, ABOVE them. Too applicable, and to more divertissements than mere rock-climbing!
First of all love that photo,
I like how you described the snake like road as sliding and slithering, just as a snake. lol
The imagery was great as usual, I could close my eyes and feel the raindrops hit my nose, ear, and my head. What awesome visualization.
Nice
ah thank you for this sweet journey, time shared on the road, it made me inhale deep to smell the forest after the rain, well penned!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Amazing! I loved how you counted and told the reader where the rain drops hit and I adored how you separated "a rumble" from the other verses. Wonderfuly written, makes a great sense of memory.
I love the photo! And the poem was amazing! I love the images your words create; theres a nostalgic feel to this that I really like. Brilliantly written, my friend!
I'm a poet, a singer, a peaceful gunslinger..
looking to share my poetry..and a little bit of me...if I dare
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