Lips form syllables...Lips form kisses...Lips show emotions...Lips are suductive... Lips are keys to everything we do and feel..outwardly as readable as the eyes... I'm not really versed in the different types of poems (high school thing...) But these Haikus that you write are soooo full of meaning...one could take apart each line word by word and fill a paragraph on each words meanings...then tackle the whole line (another paragraph) until you get to the whole poem. But your picture helped me to understand it better...sometimes I'm a visual aide type person..lol The picture also seems to me to say that ones lips are the windows to your soul..(having the eyes inbetween them lends its self to the window concept) Wonderfully crafted and very thought provoking concept...hope I read it right though :)
Amazing, so deep. Its a glimmer on the surface of love and lust. Its mysterious and captivating :) You managed to do this in a haiku which is amazing because of its brevity. I don't have a knack for the haiku so much respect for doing it so well.
All right before I give you my review...I must say how freaked out that picture has made me!!! LOL anyway, I love haikus they are short and simple and straight to the point! The three S's as I say!! Yes kissing is a complex activity as well as all the emotions behind it! Another great job, Allen!! You cease to amaze me!
I'm a poet, a singer, a peaceful gunslinger..
looking to share my poetry..and a little bit of me...if I dare
I 've been writing since I was 18.... am slightly older now, and still trying to fin.. more..