Confliction (Haiku)

Soft and tender lips

providing lasting comfort;

complex as it is.

Author's Note

copyright June 29, 2009
photo by Header...LH

Reviews

[Shy Girl]

Lips form syllables...Lips form kisses...Lips show emotions...Lips are suductive... Lips are keys to everything we do and feel..outwardly as readable as the eyes... I'm not really versed in the different types of poems (high school thing...) But these Haikus that you write are soooo full of meaning...one could take apart each line word by word and fill a paragraph on each words meanings...then tackle the whole line (another paragraph) until you get to the whole poem. But your picture helped me to understand it better...sometimes I'm a visual aide type person..lol The picture also seems to me to say that ones lips are the windows to your soul..(having the eyes inbetween them lends its self to the window concept) Wonderfully crafted and very thought provoking concept...hope I read it right though :)

[light and ashes]

Amazing, so deep. Its a glimmer on the surface of love and lust. Its mysterious and captivating :) You managed to do this in a haiku which is amazing because of its brevity. I don't have a knack for the haiku so much respect for doing it so well.

[Empirik]

Yes, I feel them too. These words are haiku with structure to follow. Nice discipline. In my own world I also dream of those lips. :)

[Sukriti Suki]

Nice!! I like the deepness in the words.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I have heard of having your foot in your mouth, but your eye in your mouth? Now that takes the cake. Nice one Allen!

[Lily Mae]

I love it Allen and you out did yourself with the Haikus and the picture wow:) x

[RibbonRoad]

Ah I see what you mean. Thank you for the review on my other account. And that picture is a little freaky o.o Haha, All in All great poem sir.

[Vanessa Rico]

All right before I give you my review...I must say how freaked out that picture has made me!!! LOL anyway, I love haikus they are short and simple and straight to the point! The three S's as I say!! Yes kissing is a complex activity as well as all the emotions behind it! Another great job, Allen!! You cease to amaze me!

[Sunni Davis]

Ah, the complexities of a kiss. I have to agree with Bradley: I'm terrified of haikus but yours is wonderfully written. I really enjoyed it, Allen.

[Brad]

haikus scare the bejeezus out of me!!! but this was so well done, i may try a few myself