People who play games should be ashamed of them selves, It's not funny and it hurts people. I believe some people really need to grow up some. I think some kids act more mature then adults do at times. Maybe some grown ups need some lessons from kids. Wonderful wisdom Allen.....xo
This makes a strong statement and i wish more people felt the way you did in this piece. I am sitting at 32 years old and if I like you, I like you if I don't l don't. If I love you I give it my all if, you can't respect me and love me in return then I walk away. I am too old for games. Great write.
I like this poem. I wish I kept some of my energy of youth. I would be more happy with the simple things. Your last lines are fact. We chose the road we are on. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote
So full of wisdom :) it makes me think about what I, and many other people I know, will be like years from now. Who will have made something of themselves and who will get left behind to lead out sad lives.
Excellent picture for the poem. You hit the nail on the head. Great insight. The time wasted playing games could be so put to better use. You penned this concept beautifully and with great precision.
I love the picture, what a lovely fountain!
Your poem is so true, our games grow old after a while
As we mature we wish for a more genuine life
One that is grounded with authentic relationships
and love and affection. Wonderful experessions
in your poem, very clever.
I'm a poet, a singer, a peaceful gunslinger..
looking to share my poetry..and a little bit of me...if I dare
I 've been writing since I was 18.... am slightly older now, and still trying to fin.. more..