Allen, this was a vivid and well-detailed poem. Like Bradly said, I can taste the brine of the sea salt breeze! How can I tell you how much I enjoyed this? It is impossible, because you have such talent and use such bright and clear descriptions that I can picture paradise in my mind! Thanks for sending me this!
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