Discovering Twilight

picture: Deerfield Beach, Fla. - 2010

I’m smiling while sitting at

the kitchen table

reawakening to the

falling twilight and

the fading of love’s

presence.

Darkness and

dread become

my companion,

as fear

turns to fright

and all within me

near withers.

The circle of life

and living,

brings about

the promise,

and hope

of a new

inspirational day.

I’ll mark on

the calendar,

the genesis of

the day’s discovery;

happiness and love

found once more.

Such is the magic

and beauty

of life.

As we wait for

the twilight,

night turns

to dawn …

hand in hand.

 

 

Author's Note

After Kate Little received my "new" poem based on her review of my original poem "Discovery", she reworked my new poem "Twilight's Discovery" into "our" poem in "Discovering Twilight". Got it? But we're not finished yet...I then tweaked our poem into Discovering Twilight 2" (1/25/11)... Whew! You have to keep reading now; you've come this far.

Reviews

[Cherrie Palmer]

that is a peaceful image

[Brad]

hahahaha, loved your note there, brothah...like the tweaks, same message a bit clearer

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

what a lovely painting of images on the poetic canvas~

[Ruth]

Blimey! Not finished? Well, as far as you have it hon, it is amazing work!
I am in awe of the beauty in this :) Elegance and divine! Your wording is graceful, such a warmth to the flow, a sheer pleasure to read!
xx

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

I think it is beautiful as it is. So full of love and imagery. The dawning of a new day with new love in hand. What a wonderful thought surely was. Thank you for sharing.

[TJ]

Haha that's a long explanation!! But it worth it of it produces this quality of work

[?]

Im thinking they just keep getting better.
What an awesome photo too.
I like this:
The circle of life
and living,
brings about
the promise,
and hope
of a new
inspirational day.

That just makes the poem, says it all. Wonderfully written, Awesome

[Vanessa Rico]

Stunning! The words and descriptions were truly a picture of beauty! (100!!!)

[LA Lorena]

Oh, this is even better! Off to find and review the next version then....