All I Got...

I got teeth that roam in the morning.

I got teeth that roam all the time.

I got teeth that smile and grin.

I got teeth that haven’t been brushed...

I got eyes that roam in the evening.

I got eyes that roam everywhere.

I got eyes that stare at the moonlight.

I got eyes that haven’t been touched...

 

I got arms that reach for you daily.

I got arms that reach into space.

I got arms that need to be ‘round you.

I got arms with no one to hold...

 

I got lips that  seek what they yearn for.

I got lips that never been kissed.

I got lips that drip from the passion.

I got lips that kiss everyday...

 

I got dreams I dream in the nighttime.

I got dreams that weigh on my soul.

I got dreams that stay with me always.

I got dreams I hope will come true...

 

I got love from here to forever.

I got love to give to you dear.

I got love to have for the asking.

I got love and wouldn’t you know...

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

June 15, 2009
picture: Key West FL .... January, 2011

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Love the style, and the creativity. Amazing poem Allen:)

[shoaib]

nice work mate, nothing like floridas weather and beauty to inspire
awesome job

[Dream Weaver]

The repetition usually kills a good write faster then a shark can smell
blood in the water, but this my friend is not only upbeat and toe tapp'in
but an amazing piece of fun! Nicely done...

[Brad]

damn, man, this was heard with a 3 chord blues in G

[Sunni Davis]

I love the sort of whimsical-nursery-rhyme feel to this while at the core is a dreamy- romantic feeling. Its charming and sweet. Nicely written!

[Muse]

I like the pic. I love how art can inspire words. And it appears this peice of art inspired you very well. :)

[Lily Mae]

You've covered it all and well.. :) xx

[?]

Hey this was a fun piece. Enjoyed it very much.
ummm what about the legs or feet? lol
I really enjoyed this Allen

[TJ]

I agree with Kim, Allen, this is not what I'm used to seeing from you...which makes it all the more wonderful

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

Pretty cool Allen, A little different for you. xo