Me, Myself, and I

Me, Myself, and I

A Poem by Allen Smuckler
"

Brrrrr, is all I could say....I'm otta here for warmer weather...

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Too damn cold

at the Pawley Resort.

No reason to distort,

gotta be bold

(I said to myself).

 

I needed to be

south of here.

Cracked open a beer,

decided to flee.

(I thought to myself).

 

Left at 12 noon

instead of ten.

Did not know when,

only knew soon

(I assured myself).

 

Deerfield Beach

on the left side coast.

10 p.m. at the most

not otta reach

(I prayed to myself).

 

Roasting and toasting

I lie by the pool.

Mom raised no fool,

wistful and coasting

(I grinned to myself).

 

 

 

© 2011 Allen Smuckler


Author's Note

Allen Smuckler
January 29, 2009
South Carolina is just too cold for me in the winter...Florida is the place to be, if you want warmth...so I left for good.
Photo: Litchfield Beach, Pawley Island, SC (January, 2009)...picture tells it all.

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I guess it's all about perspectives! I look at that picture and see blue skies and no snow, and think it looks pretty good. LOL! An enjoyable read all the same.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice one...I loved the picture....really put across how cold it is! Nice write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Love the way thoughts are expressed here, and the bracket lines just make it awesome :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Allen Smuckler
Allen Smuckler

Sarasota, FL



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I'm a poet, a singer, a peaceful gunslinger.. looking to share my poetry..and a little bit of me...if I dare I 've been writing since I was 18.... am slightly older now, and still trying to fin.. more..

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