Magical Moments (Haiku)

 

Magical moments

on soft spun sandy beaches;

alone and in love

 

Author's Note

June 28, 2009
Haiku are tercets of 5-7-5- syllables. Like any form, there is a certain amount of room for interpretation and exploration...

Reviews

[Becky C Strukamp]

These words and the emotions they elicit are magical! We should all want to experience this. Excellent write Allen.

[Michael X]

Beautifully written and expressed work Allen, you capture the cool of a summer breeze, the salty sweet ocean air, in perfected haiku fashion, romance set to a blue sky back splash, romance then wonder, excellent work here, much enjoyed ^_^

[Kruppz]

That's the magic of a Haiku-
Simple. Short. Subtle.
:)

[Ruth]

Says it all hon! No more, no less! Superb, a moment captured that shall resonate for eternity! ♥

[VelvetRosetta]

I can see myself alone with the sand, sun and sea...but be as in love with it as if I had someone special next to my side...lovely peace Allen!

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Very nice picture as well as Haiku. Love it, so relaxing it seems.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Deeply romantic. It has a soft and warm feel to it.

[r. f. jordan]

i don't have much background in the way of Haiku, but i believe this to be a beautiful piece. the picture blends well with the subject matter, and i like the dissonance created by the idea that one can be alone and in love at the same time. nice work.

[Sara]

I love Haikus, they're so much fun and so tricky.
I enjoy reading your work and this poem makes me want to just ditch work and head to Galveston right now.
Simply perfect!

[Rosalind Gale]

Oh Allen Smuckler
You write with such verve and heart
Thank you for this piece

Rosa -x-