Directions For Destiny's Heartland
A Poem by
Allen Smuckler
Decided to repost....hope you don't mind.
Westerly flows on
a northbound
express..
Trembling wasteland
in the dreams of
her dress...
Southerly tides
in East Michigan’s
winter...
cascading skies
under a buried
splinter...
Destiny’s heartland
in the middle of
nowhere...
condoms and fish gear
on a diet of
Lite Beer...
© 2012 Allen Smuckler
Compartment 114
Compartment 114
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Author's Note
December 3, 2000
touched up July 30, 2009
Picture of Marilyn in Key West, Fla. - February, 2011
Reviews
I love Marilyn, she was definitely a classic beauty. And the poem is amazing; I love the rhyme and flow of it. Brilliantly written, dear friend!
Posted 13 Years Ago
I do enjoy a good rhyme my friend and I must say that this is
a tremendous write. I'm diggin the infamous Marilyn pic, it adds
a certain nostalgic feel with a humorist twist..
Posted 13 Years Ago
I do enjoy a good rhyme my friend and I must say that this is
a tremendous write. I'm diggin the infamous Marilyn pic, it adds
a certain nostalgic feel with a humorist twist..
Love the last stanza, This is amazing.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Love the last stanza, This is amazing.
Interesting...I am literally forced to think and imagine with your words. The picture, oh so lovely.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Interesting...I am literally forced to think and imagine with your words. The picture, oh so lovely.
Lol! You are full of surprises? I loe Marilyn Monro she will always be the sexiest woman ever lived! You wrote:
Destiny’s heartland
in the middle of
nowhere...
condoms and fish gear
on a diet of
Lite Beer...
Definitely a man's perspective ;)
Posted 13 Years Ago
Lol! You are full of surprises? I loe Marilyn Monro she will always be the sexiest woman ever lived! You wrote:
Destiny’s heartland
in the middle of
nowhere...
condoms and fish gear
on a diet of
Lite Beer...
Definitely a man's perspective ;)
I, too, feel like I am not aware of some back story going on here. But regardless, I really like the words you chose to write with. Plus, you always have a great picture to accompany your write!
Posted 13 Years Ago
I, too, feel like I am not aware of some back story going on here. But regardless, I really like the words you chose to write with. Plus, you always have a great picture to accompany your write!
I like your photos. This photo is beautiful. I like the description in the poem. Took me to many place with your words. Thank you for a outstanding poem.
Coyote
Posted 13 Years Ago
I like your photos. This photo is beautiful. I like the description in the poem. Took me to many place with your words. Thank you for a outstanding poem.
Coyote
Thank you for letting me know you changed this one.............quite an interesting story you have going here that I am apparently not privy to. :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
Thank you for letting me know you changed this one.............quite an interesting story you have going here that I am apparently not privy to. :)
I had to smile at this...I feel as though there is an entire back story that I'm not privy to. Loved the rhythm and rhyme. Nice to meet you!
Posted 14 Years Ago
I had to smile at this...I feel as though there is an entire back story that I'm not privy to. Loved the rhythm and rhyme. Nice to meet you!
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Added on April 18, 2011
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Author
Allen Smuckler Sarasota, FL
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I'm a poet, a singer, a peaceful gunslinger..
looking to share my poetry..and a little bit of me...if I dare
I 've been writing since I was 18.... am slightly older now, and still trying to fin..
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