A Girl

 Fleecy, golden, shiny crown,

glimmering from the sun’s reflection.

Standing silent with the sea,

shivering from the wind’s conviction.

 

Talking, laughing from the heart,

shuddering from the word destruction.

Walking slowly on the beach,

smiling with a warm affection.

 

Wincing, squinting from the glare,

entering into love’s confusion.

Hoping, praying to the Lord,

wandering in beauty’s direction.

 

Kissing, loving in a dream,

shimmering haze of contemplation.

Gazing, staring in her eyes,

I’m now in love without rejection.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

January 21, 1969
One of my first poems...40+ years ago
It feels like eons

Reviews

[Inyourshadow]

Another truely romantic piece penned with wonderful energy and emotion, loved the picture you presented also. Keep em' coming

[Muse]

First off.............kudos to you for being creative with your presentation. Not enough writers do this. They think they should only be judged on their words. But I"m sorry, give me the whole package! I think you underestimate your ability to be a romantic. I enjoyed this very much! xo

[Becky C Strukamp]

WOW, its amazing. So warm, tender and romantic. I Loved it. Just beautiful!

[Tasha]

This was beautiful and loving. An amazing piece Allen.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Richielee]

wow have you got her number ? sounds like the ideal lady : )

[Lily Mae]

Very nice and loving.. it's soft and sexy..x A beauty Allen..the write and the woman..xx

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. Description took me to a beautiful place. The old poetry had a innocent we lose with time. Than you for a beautiful poem.
Coyote