Truth be Told

short and sweet...sometimes one thought is enough. What's better than family?

I have long arms…

I don’t know why

I have long arms

but I do,

 

and I’m proud.

 

Everyone should have

what I have…

It would make

hugging each other

so much better…

 

and last

so much longer.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Written: November 24, 2006
Photo; Nov. 23. 2006 (Thanksgiving)
Aunt Cele; cousins Corky, Nathan, Fiona in background
daughter Katie in doorway

Reviews

[K writes]

such a wonderful write....

[Allen Smuckler]

Thank you Kaykey for taking the time to read and respond. Much appreciated.

[theta sigma]

A very nice peice of work. very good.

[Allen Smuckler]

Thanks Theta for taking the time to read and comment. Much appreciated..
allen

[Terry O'Leary]

I have long arms, huge hands, and long finger...
the better to hold you (plural, i.e. everyone) with ;-)
Nice poem!!!

[DayDreamerAmber]

Awww this is wonderfully heartfelt!

[Michael (Letters and Li..]

You've managed to take one thought and expand it so that the whole piece embraces the reader like a big hug. Very well written!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Your words describes a feelings for your loved ones wonderful my friend!

[Wandering Minstrel]

nice to see this beautiful and expressive piece.

[Anne Timmins]

You write so beautifully...the words and the presentation and this is no exception

[jacob erin-cilberto]

very very clever and cute...warm fuzzy feelings from this...nothing like a good hug.

jacob

[Mary C]

Passionately expressed, ...very well composed