Truth be Told

Truth be Told

A Poem by Allen Smuckler
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short and sweet...sometimes one thought is enough. What's better than family?

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I have long arms…

I don’t know why

I have long arms

but I do,

 

and I’m proud.

 

Everyone should have

what I have…

It would make

hugging each other

so much better…

 

and last

so much longer.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2013 Allen Smuckler


Author's Note

Allen Smuckler
Written: November 24, 2006
Photo; Nov. 23. 2006 (Thanksgiving)
Aunt Cele; cousins Corky, Nathan, Fiona in background
daughter Katie in doorway

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such a wonderful write....

Posted 3 Years Ago


Allen Smuckler

3 Years Ago

Thank you Kaykey for taking the time to read and respond. Much appreciated.
A very nice peice of work. very good.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Allen Smuckler

9 Years Ago

Thanks Theta for taking the time to read and comment. Much appreciated..
allen
I have long arms, huge hands, and long finger...
the better to hold you (plural, i.e. everyone) with ;-)
Nice poem!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Awww this is wonderfully heartfelt!

Posted 9 Years Ago


You've managed to take one thought and expand it so that the whole piece embraces the reader like a big hug. Very well written!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Your words describes a feelings for your loved ones wonderful my friend!

Posted 10 Years Ago


nice to see this beautiful and expressive piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


You write so beautifully...the words and the presentation and this is no exception

Posted 10 Years Ago


very very clever and cute...warm fuzzy feelings from this...nothing like a good hug.

jacob

Posted 10 Years Ago


Passionately expressed, ...very well composed

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Allen Smuckler
Allen Smuckler

Sarasota, FL



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I'm a poet, a singer, a peaceful gunslinger.. looking to share my poetry..and a little bit of me...if I dare I 've been writing since I was 18.... am slightly older now, and still trying to fin.. more..

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