Well constructed with this write... I like the presentation of the picture... gives the reader an idea before reading the intent of the lines...
In this ever growing world of ours and the children next to take reign... they develop so much faster and experience events with a click of a button... in turn they teach us more of what we've missed in life... and do we do our part to guide them in the right direction...
Yes, your photo is lovely. I think of the verse in the Bible that says: "Except we have the faith of a child we shall not enter heaven." Your poem beautifully illustrates this my friend. Thanks
Beautiful Allen I often wonder who learns more the children from us or we from them But it is always a beautiful ride isnt it.I smile all the time at the glow of life i know I pressed into them and they reflected back
We can only hope that they turn out better in some ways...but most often they find their own path that's different than ours. So to gage the difference between...it can not be measured. I too liked the picture. :)
So well said. I love the picture as it shows the beauty and hopefulness for both the young and their elders. Xo
Posted 11 Years Ago
For they are our future, this is a nice poetical, and philosopical, educational write, with ecological aspects, for as it goes, and goes, for many years, over into each other without a stop, many rich thoughts, and development here. I think that pic is most cute, I see myself sitting reading books with my dad on that age, he a fantastic novel, me an adventures... this speaks volume.
the parents of young children are their world, all they know. their innocence is the canvas we paint on and through our example they will become a piece of our art. their innocence is also a lesson for us.
I'm a poet, a singer, a peaceful gunslinger..
looking to share my poetry..and a little bit of me...if I dare
I 've been writing since I was 18.... am slightly older now, and still trying to fin.. more..