for them ... for us
A Poem by
Allen Smuckler
The aura emulates from
the beautiful
children
as they look and
discover the unionized
world we
created
for them …
… and they see and grow
and develop
into who and what
we expect,
desire
and hope will come
to be
for them
and
for us …
… but the landing is
never precise or as
hard as we
imagine
it will be…
adults always worry
as children reassure
and offer comfort
for us …
… those precious
imaginative eyes
search the universe
for answers
and questions
we never knew to ask
for them …
… as the world
becomes more
tolerable,
acceptable
and they
teach the adults
what it means
to be honest, pure
and that all is well
for them
and for us …
We begin to
change in
order
to realize the
hopes
and dreams of
the next generation
for them
and
for us…
© 2013 Allen Smuckler
Author's Note
written: July 10, 2013
Barrington, RI
Photo: Cielo & me
Reviews
truly great insight in this piece...so often we only think in terms of "teaching our children well" (as CSN) put it...
but it is often they who teach us.
kids are so honest...imaginative, and unbiased...and sometimes unfortunately they learn the bad stuff from us, while teaching us the good stuff.
wonderful write.
Posted 11 Years Ago
I must say... this truly tugs at my heart!
You poured your heart and soul into this, and it brings tears to own heart...
"those precious
imaginative eyes
search the universe
for answers
and questions
we never knew to ask
for them …"~ It's for them, the next generation... we need to cherish them...
Lovely, heartfelt write, Allen!... sweet pic, BTW.. ~xoxo~:)
Posted 11 Years Ago
I must say... this truly tugs at my heart!
You poured your heart and soul into this, and it brings tears to own heart...
"those precious
imaginative eyes
search the universe
for answers
and questions
we never knew to ask
for them …"~ It's for them, the next generation... we need to cherish them...
Lovely, heartfelt write, Allen!... sweet pic, BTW.. ~xoxo~:)
Allen, this is a must read for everyone...
Posted 11 Years Ago
Allen, this is a must read for everyone...
Such wise words, Allen! Let's hope we adults can change fast enough to make certain the generations to come will live lives as bountifully supplied with the good things we have enjoyed. I enjoyed your poem very much - sincerely written and thought-provoking. Thanks.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Such wise words, Allen! Let's hope we adults can change fast enough to make certain the generations to come will live lives as bountifully supplied with the good things we have enjoyed. I enjoyed your poem very much - sincerely written and thought-provoking. Thanks.
"We begin to change in order to realize the hopes and dreams of the next generation for them and for us…"
Generations have hoped for a better world for their children....hoped their children would have an easier life and a sweeter one. This is a poem for the ages. Allen. Filled with hope and with compassion. Just wonderful. Lydi**
Posted 11 Years Ago
"We begin to change in order to realize the hopes and dreams of the next generation for them and for us…"
Generations have hoped for a better world for their children....hoped their children would have an easier life and a sweeter one. This is a poem for the ages. Allen. Filled with hope and with compassion. Just wonderful. Lydi**
Thatz so sweet pic and nicely written piece Allen :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
Thatz so sweet pic and nicely written piece Allen :)
What a terrific write! So full of hope, treasure, and trueness. So many I wish could see like this. Xo. Thanks.
Posted 11 Years Ago
What a terrific write! So full of hope, treasure, and trueness. So many I wish could see like this. Xo. Thanks.
Beautiful Poetry. Even better photo.. shallimarRose
Posted 11 Years Ago
Beautiful Poetry. Even better photo.. shallimarRose
This poem is an amazing write describing our lives and that of our children. Beautifully composed and rich in sincerity!
Posted 11 Years Ago
This poem is an amazing write describing our lives and that of our children. Beautifully composed and rich in sincerity!
This is so beautifully written and so truthful.
Posted 11 Years Ago
This is so beautifully written and so truthful.
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Allen Smuckler Sarasota, FL
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I'm a poet, a singer, a peaceful gunslinger..
looking to share my poetry..and a little bit of me...if I dare
I 've been writing since I was 18.... am slightly older now, and still trying to fin..
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