I Will Wait

In the sea so far away I will wait until another day,

Days have past, years gone by,

And yet I am still here waiting.

You have gone so far away,

Left me here all alone,

And yet I am still here waiting.

The young rebels crack jokes, 

The old and grey whisper amongst themselves,

But still, I lie here waiting. 

 I'm on my bed with a faint trickle of light in my eyes,

 Finally, I can stop waiting because my time has come.

Let us be together forever,

One life ends, and our new journey begins...

 

Reviews

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

interesting build up, and also there is an interesting contrast with the two last verses...great write

vincent
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