Read once that sensuality is an art which come with an unknown urge to be and feel free. Still trying to work that out, thinking of people i know or have met who have that special subtle zing to their gender. Your words encapsulate my known in your ' It's owning your body, your mind, and your heart, Embracing your sensuality, a work of art.' How respectfully you place your thoughts - to put what could be a crude frenzy into view but to discover how an honest person sees what a passionate spirit can do to certain people. You write superbly.
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
Thank you kindly, Emma for your detailed review! Appreciate your visit always!
I love this Alla, well done! Very graphic and moving. A lovely read and really enjoyed your work. Maybe you'd enjoy reading my poems, 'Sway' and 'Solo Dancer."
Take care my friend.
Richard
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
Thank you for your review Richard! Just read your "Solo Dancer" - very special. Thank you for sharin.. read moreThank you for your review Richard! Just read your "Solo Dancer" - very special. Thank you for sharing
To me, there's nothing more precious or enthralling than a woman's natural sensuality … made to enjoin a man's primal, perfectly matching, insatiable desires, cravings, and wondrously mental, spiritual, and physical mutuality in empowering our transcendently climactic yearnings.
That I can say it so emphatically masculine, is laid flat by virtue of the sheer magical elegance of your femininely gentle, poetic voice … and, I can't help but virtually feel your love, respect, and enjoyment of free-spirited, mutually natural, consensual connection.
In considering the skillfully creative diction and syntactic flow, metaphor, vivid imagery, spot-on rhymes, and steady meter in the manner your undulating waves of rhythmic ambiance dance upon the page, I feel rather safe in assuming this is definitely not your first poetic rodeo … and, I am gratefully thrilled with the privilege of meeting and enjoying a new poetess of such high caliber at the Café.
Thinkin' out loud here (and, I know you did not ask), but the unmatched rhyme of L1 & 2 is the only stumble in an otherwise perfect composition. Perhaps, consider:
"Sensuality is in the movements, in glances we share,
In the timbre of the voice, a magic that's rare," (or, somesuch)
Okay, I'm ducking … LOL!
Sincerely, I've entirely enjoyed you in my very first read and review.
Thank you ever-so warmly, Alla ⁓ Richard🖌
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
Totally agree with your recommendation, Richard on the "in glances we share" Much appreciate a cons.. read moreTotally agree with your recommendation, Richard on the "in glances we share" Much appreciate a constructive review and most important thank you for an absolutely beautiful essay respond to the subject.
"Sexuality is something that can't be hidden, not something that you try to show"
This is such a wise sentence you mentioned dear Alla, I suggest every school in the world, must teach this way of thinking to the children and teenagers, especially in Iran, where. religion has made people so sick that they can't enjoy a healthy sexual life due to Taboos of expressing love and sexuality.
I always applaud women, in many fields, especially the emotions. I'm really looking to find myself a good female friend who I can share that feelings with(now I seem a bit naughty)
All the vest wishes for you Alla
Nima
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
Best wishes to find the right person, Nima! And thank you for your thoughts and your review
I have six sisters, three daughter and one wife. I know the ladies start the fire. I told my son. Women are cats. Fickle. Men are just dogs waiting for a bone. If a woman wants your attention. She will get your attention. I agree dear Alla. Romance is everything. But also. We must excite the mind first than the body second. Thank you for sharing your amazing thoughts and the poetry.
Coyote
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
Looks like you are a ladies man having s many around :)
Of coarse the sensuality comes from t.. read moreLooks like you are a ladies man having s many around :)
Of coarse the sensuality comes from the mind... Thank you so much for your review and wisdom
Well rhymed quatrains here describing a positive philosophy regarding the body. I must ask, though, if sensuality and sexuality are the same thing. Some sensuous activities don't include sex.
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
Absolutely! The poem is not about sex but the personal sensual space that transforms thru the body a.. read moreAbsolutely! The poem is not about sex but the personal sensual space that transforms thru the body and shines. Thank you, John
U welcome, also could u help me review my recent poem, I need to poetry and not sure if I’m doing .. read moreU welcome, also could u help me review my recent poem, I need to poetry and not sure if I’m doing the right thing, I jus write what I feel
Sensuality is a must in our lives. It is the passion that drives us, feeds us and motivates us - yes, even in poetry. Thank you for a most invigorating read, Alla. Nice to meet you!
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
Thank you for your review, Kelly and yes, very nice meeting you as well!
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