Many

Many

A Poem by Alister Flik

 What color am I, you ask.

What a silly suggestion;

that anyone's soul could be expressed so simply.

What color you ask?

Perhaps I will try.

The colors of a stormy sea;

the soul in turmoil.

The blinding white of the saint

with the yellow rays of pride,

or the all-consuming ebony of the sinner,

for when my thoughts turn against me

and self-hatred takes hold.

These are just a few.

If you disagree with my paradox,

you should not have asked,

what color.

© 2008 Alister Flik


Author's Note

Alister Flik
Not exactly the original. Recreated from memory. Not that anybody here will notice; I'm just saying.

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ah yes, I never restricted it to one color. so yes, this was a very good poem. i liked how you formatted it, with the repeating question. very nice! thank you for entering my contest.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this piece very much.
We are many colors, not just one flat color.
It is the shades of the soul that matter most I think.



Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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