Awen

Cold stoles the coast in geisha voiles
of pawned Atlantic mourning, where

The plangent skirl of larids 

carry through the vast exquisite
plains of February emptiness.

Aloft on coronal ruin, she flew
in free form falling, between the spheres
she grew in brightness, and at her stroke,
the moping shale, appeared , as if transformed.

She blessed the face of stained glass saints
hung loud on hallowed walls. From a
palisade of glinting brinks, she 
hauled deserted chapels into 
parishes of lambent wake
their majesties , reborn.

Reviews

[lightsong]

You, my friend live in a world Your own, and carry us into and through it with Your words. Your words exquisite, artistic, majestic and ethereal, totally felt as a real "Awen" "Muse", if I got Your meaning right, You've described a Goddess whom You feel with Your eyes, capture with Your senses while She whispers to You from high, through the Nature around You.

if You are living there, then now I can understand more when You say You know that You are fortunate than others, I would DIE there, then live to die again!

Thank You my intelligent friend, You've shared with us a magnificent glory!.

[Alistair (Ali)]

You got "Awen" spot on there!- very well done!
Thank you kindly my friend,...I have to admit to being a little creative with the framing of the picture.
If one was to pan out a wee bit, then we would see a more industrial scene craning ( see what i did there?) in the background...however, I would like to give thanks to that day for lending me some words.
All blessings to you.

[Sami Khalil]

Beautiful scenery and description. I see you are enjoying some travels.

[Alistair (Ali)]

Thank you kindly, my friend- and am so sorry for the late reply- there is much going on this end.read moreThank you kindly, my friend- and am so sorry for the late reply- there is much going on this end.
I live in Cardiff, and that picture is just down the road- I count my blessings on days like those.
Thank you Sami.

[Ruth]

Left me breathless...absolutely beautiful! You have woven such imagery within this my senses melted :)

[Alistair (Ali)]

Thank you kindly- That is Cardiff Bay, along with its wee Norwegian church- even on the grayest days, their is still a light that moves across the water...

[Sami Khalil]

Wow!....................