Is that to much to ask?

Is that to much to ask?

A Poem by AlisonMarie<3

All I want is someone to notice I'm hurting
Someone to see past my fake smile
All I want is someone to notice I'm hurting
Someone to dry my eyes
Someone to tell me I'm alright
All I want is someone to notice I'm hurting
Someone to hold me close when somethings wrong
Someone to make me feel like I belong
Someone to comfort me when days are long
All I want is someone to notice I'm hurting
Someone to say I'm worth it
Someone to help me through this
Someone to keep these cuts off my wrist
Someone to hold and to kiss
All want is love

© 2010 AlisonMarie<3


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AlisonMarie<3
This is what I consider school appropriate(:

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It is strong and to the point. The poem describe need and desire of someone to make you feel needed and loved. That is a good thing. I like this poem. The poem told a outstanding story of need.
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Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on April 24, 2010
Last Updated on April 24, 2010
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AlisonMarie<3
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My name is Alison Wilson, I am the strangest girl you will ever meet. I love poetry and I write a lot of it (why i got this thing) You may think from knowing me that my poems are bright and colorful b.. more..

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