Surrounded

This bruised body

Hit, hurt, but never loved

These crying eyes

Seen, questioned, but never dried

This broken heart

Ripped, torn, but never fixed

These bloody wrist

Acheing, scarred, but never healed

This lonely girl

Hated, dying but never alone

Reviews

[Emily Paige]

ILY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Emily Paige]

there's lots of feeling in this i love it great job hun ^-^

[Mickey]

Really good poem, could definitely feel the pain..

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. I could feel the pain, hurt and suffering in the words. We can be surrounded and feel no peace or contentment. I like this poem. Strong and to the point. A excellent poem.
Coyote