Falling From Fake

Falling From Fake

A Poem by _Ally_
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Questioning the differences of what's real, what's sincere, and what's fake.

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Falling From Fake
Blinded by commonalities or consumed by differences you've been missing the bigger picture.
Values become lost and there is no such thing as even.
(You're falling from fake.)
When spoken seldom meets actions with blurred intentions and the unspoken becomes that much more questionable.
(Are you falling for fake?)
Running into brick walls of miscommunication full of set backs so you double back.
(You're falling from fake.)
Layers of walls that had crumbled from repetitive sweet words, too common without sincerity, has been tagged with the realization of just how unoriginal they are.  You're it...
(Are you falling for fake?)
Having tunnel vision you get lost like a vicious nightmare repeating itself wholeheartedly.
(You're falling from fake.)
Stepping confident but carefully owning the only worry you have and it isn't your own.
(Are you falling for fake?)
As each fall lands grounded with sure fire lessons of repair, rebuild, regain...
We all fall from fake.

© 2023 _Ally_


Author's Note

_Ally_
I am open for any suggestions for improvement.

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I like the feelings in here, I truly do. It's cold yet the use of unity at the end brings a certain warmth.

I want to feel that warmth that makes us all "flakes". I want to see those feelings with more content or items associated to each concept. How does one "[Run] into brick walls of miscommunication...?" What do those people say? What movements occur: hand gesture, pressed lips? Let me feel as how you feel with the mundane. The mundane is the substance and I would love to see more of it.

Thank you for this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

_Ally_

9 Years Ago

I appreciate your suggestions



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Questioning sincerity is very relevant. We are all guilty of adaptations to society's demands. Character lies hide who we really are, what our true nature is.

Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the feelings in here, I truly do. It's cold yet the use of unity at the end brings a certain warmth.

I want to feel that warmth that makes us all "flakes". I want to see those feelings with more content or items associated to each concept. How does one "[Run] into brick walls of miscommunication...?" What do those people say? What movements occur: hand gesture, pressed lips? Let me feel as how you feel with the mundane. The mundane is the substance and I would love to see more of it.

Thank you for this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

_Ally_

9 Years Ago

I appreciate your suggestions

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Added on October 1, 2015
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_Ally_

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