Blue

Emotions mixed with realism

Blue

These clouds rolling over a light blue sky have been travelling for miles as days go by.

Intentions seeking like fresh water melt downs in spring.

The same as tears flow without words that don't mean anything.

Salty waves that are formed from storms day and night.

Generated in oceans full of hidden life.

To be so naked, exposed, and vulnerable for the ride.

In everything natural worn down by aqua tides.

Navy night skies that are clear and hide so much.

From the blind eyes that have over looked value but have clung like a crutch.

Royaly smacked by seasons changing these struggles carry a song.

Woven like denim, roughed up, barely hanging on.

Author's Note

I am open to all suggestions for improvement!

Reviews

[Nila M.]

I really like how each line tells it's own story and can almost stand independently. I also appreciate how the theme of blue was implied throughout. Very creative and enjoyable write. My name actually means blue in sanskrit, so this one drew my attention :) thank you

[Zugzwang]

A very interesting and thought provoking poem. Thank you for sharing it.

[_Ally_]

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