Unseen Beauty of the sea

Unseen Beauty of the sea

A Poem by All*son

 

 

 

Deep down beneath ocean green seas

His fair mistress goes unrealized

With each immaculate day  

She swims with simple lonely sighs

With all that is pure inside

Seemingly and merely going unnoticed

Years she swam underneath the seas

Searching for that particular soul

To catch her heart and put it at ease

She is and no-one else

But true beauty of nature

Gracious and finer than things in life

And waits for whom they will share

Arriving to the surface

Together for the first time inhale fresh air

© 2008 All*son


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This is really gorgeous. It flows really nicely into a perfect crescendo at the end.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely description!!!

The flow was perfect this, and the rhyme scheme was smooth and beautiful--much like the topic, I dare say. Well done.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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