Autumn Leaf

Tanka about autumn.

Swaying scarlet leaf,
Swaying in the autumn wind.
Upon the oak tree.
Cleave just a little longer,
Or meet the fate of thy rake.

Reviews

[Butch Decatoria]

Wonderful and have to say perfect... perfectly scribed tanka... i have a couple of em somewhere, but anyhow, bravo on your skillful perfect masterpiece. It really is good.

[Kieta!]

Hahaha I love this!!!!! The last line is so fun! "or meet the fate of thy rake" It's brilliant!!! Thanks for the laugh and the read!! Great job with the tanka!!