Rose

Rose

A Poem by Aliina
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About deceitful love

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You were a rose,
I picked you amongst so many others,
You filled my life with your sweet fragrance,
One day, you pricked me,
And you left a scar in my heart,
Which will never fade away,
Even with the lapse of time....

© 2017 Aliina


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Wow, this sounds like almost everyone's love life lol
On a serious note though i liked it, its really nice and i felt like i could relate to this all the way.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Aliina

7 Years Ago

Thanks very much for commenting.
Chad-Andrew

7 Years Ago

Your welcome. keep up the good work :)

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Added on April 15, 2017
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Aliina
Aliina

Port louis, Mauritius



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