Different

A bird doesn’t belong

at the bottom of the sea.

Gasping for air

he has no oxygen

to breathe.

 Wet, matted down.

Wings can’t flap with water

weighing them down.

Fish keep telling him,

It’ll get better someday.

What do fish care?

They’re content

right where they are.

Reviews

[Nosce Te Ipsum]

i really like this one, i see a bit of similarity in the way we write..short, incomplete, and to the point sentences :)