Freezed motion

"I have danced on the last skyscraper. Every brick seemed curious about my final pirouette. The sirens seemed melodic and balanced with the great wanderlust to the white doors of self-embraced dancing.

Imagine a neverending dance. Just you and your great intangbility. 

Sharing the space with a douce zephyr coming through the muzzle of termites that are trying to broach your wooden cranium is quite amusing. 

You must try it by lust-chased seeker of the gold. You must.

Steady is the vibration of the core. The core is layered transparent, don't worry. 

Will I ever be as close to the sky as I was that day? Well, to be honest the sky is chasing me. "

"You know Phil, it's great to feel. However,sometimes we overfeel and break the legacy of consciousness. You are all here as dominoes. Falling for each other's concerns. You are not here for vacation. Your nerves won't drink pinacoladas while your perspiration is climbing volcanoes. So swallow the freezing drop, please. Just to keep your journey further from the impasse." 

"I don't want to move. I want to pass. We are all here as dominoes. I won't push sanity away. Sanity is freezing. I love to stab the wanderer with reproduced icicles. Not vomiting them, producing them. Cold world. Freezed struggles."

"Good boy. So now please follow my steps. As you may see I move without leaving footprints. So should you. Those who are meant to shine have already overshadowed the sun. "

"There is no importance. I'm meant to be blur. There is no need to be found and seen. I'm nothing but an appendix in your anatomy world. "

"I guess my job is done. Thanks for joining the "Pacification of perplexity therapy" . I'm so glad that you can hide behind the wall and never crash the bricks again. Kudos."

"I'm glad that you pleased cohort. Let me just take a final bow before the cement takes the motion away."

Reviews

[Rob Santana]

What unique piece of work Jeanette, eccentric please don't take that in a bad way. "Thanks for joining the 'Pacification of perplexity therapy" awesome words you created. Love this piece.

[Jeannette Lunete]

Thanks a lot Rob for these encouraging words. They mean a lot to me. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. :)
And, well "eccentric" sounds good to me...I tend to pulverize the sane out of them. :)

[Rob Santana]

hahahaha, nothing wrong with a little pulverizing!!!

[Wórdsmíth]

My fav. line: "Steady is the vibration of the core. The core is layered transparent, don't worry." Sounds like a piece of relief gets broken off the flesh of your flowery heart. Happy to consume your incense inside in disguise of reading such a glorious art.

[Jeannette Lunete]

Well, thanks for these cheerful words Wordsmith. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I appreciate it a lot. :)

[ANM]

A journey into the unknown with all possibilities fighting for attention , a patch work of writing beautifully stitched together always a pleasure!!!

[Jeannette Lunete]

Thanks a lot ANM for this delightful review. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. It means a lot to me. :)

[ANM]

You are very welcome the pleasure was mine in the reading of your words!

[Rene Salinas]

What an intriguing journey I have grown accustomed to expect that from your writings. They seem full of twists and turns and in their own circumventing way they flow organically. Or at least that's how it feels for me. There seems to be a strong precence here for those who go throughthe motions unquestionably and those who do not want to comply and create their own journey so to speak. There also seems to be a reference for those who will try to exaust all possibilities. Leaving it all behind , all out there. But all and all a very ellusive writing.

Greatly enjoyed.

Thankyou

[Jeannette Lunete]

Thanks a lot Rene for reading in reviewing in your unique and lustrous way. I've deeply enjoyed reading your interpretation as always. :)

[Rene Salinas]

We do try....