Pseudo delirium effect

Restless parades of upcoming doubts are shooting my introspective soldier with blanks. 

Cracked lips are now struggling with pseudo consternation screams. 

How to abandon the meridian of upcoming botheration?

Maybe there is a thread in this world dominated by a possessive porcelain marionette?

Maybe there are birds tired of the celestial infinity?

I don't even know anymore...

The world praised my gentle talent to create deliriums many years ago. 

They call me Nono. My midwife's first words after the premier blink of my down-turned eyes were: "No, no."

She fainted down like a limp flamingo suffering from Stendhal syndrome when she first saw me.

Obviously I was meant to be a total disaster. Or just a fossilized museum attraction captivated for future generations of deadlock mindsets.

I was never stuck in the routine to worry day by day about affection or affiliation.

I was simply not qualified for taking the magnifier and catching the last string of despair.

I eliminated the passing time signature. 

I didn't care about the essence. 

There was simply nothing to worry about except the loss of everything mentioned.

So I created placebos for everything.

Even the Man that comes around passed me. I considered it as a very ignorant act of misconception.

Or maybe I was already gone... 

Reviews

[Rene Salinas]

I remember a class I had one at university making music in computers by coding the sounds in . I know it sounds boring, in fact it is boring, but the teacher always use to say "is like a corridor of chameleons". I think what she meant although not sure, is like the sound is never quite as it seems, creating doubt and consternation. This is one of the many writings I have read from you and I can start to see how the dimension of the things we think they are but maybe they are not as a common thread.

Welcome the what is not! to be suspended in semi - life by your anti - being. Christopher Hitchens.

Thankyou!

[Jeannette Lunete]

Thank you very much Rene . I am glad that you understand the concept of my blur acts of expression.
P.S. It's not boring, it is a quite interesting theory, to find myself in. And thank you for bringing up one of my favourite quotes. :)

[Rene Salinas]

Well if you haven't already watch some of Christopher Hitchens arguments with theologians on youtube he was a ferocious characther very clever

[Amaranta]

Very captivating, I'm definitely in love with the way you write!

[Jeannette Lunete]

Thanks a lot Amaranta. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. :)

[Sami Khalil]

" taking the magnifier and catching the last string of despair.
I eliminated the passing time signature. "


Depression is a serious medical condition with so many effects. I could lead in its severity to delirium.
This was a great write on this subject and its effects...Bravo.........

[Jeannette Lunete]

Thanks a lot Sami for reading and reviewing. It means a lot to me. :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..........

[don't know]

Maybe there are birds tired of the celestial infinity?
I don't even know anymore...
Or maybe I was already gone...
Clever write makes you think

[Jeannette Lunete]

Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing. I'm glad that it makes you think. I appreciate it. :)

[JC]

intriguing piece, the words flow nicely together like the field report of a CIA agent, gave me a Burroughs feel, like we were traveling dimensions through words of delectation.

[Jeannette Lunete]

Well, thanks Jason for this interesting interpretation. I'm glad that it moved you into new dimensions. It means a lot to me. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

"I was never stuck in the routine to worry day by day about affection or affiliation.
I was simply not qualified for taking the magnifier and catching the last string of despair.
I eliminated the passing time signature.
I didn't care about the essence"
Above lines stood out for me. When we learn. What is true and what we need. We have gained wisdom. Very good use of words made the reader think and ponder life and things. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Jeannette Lunete]

Thank you very much Coyote Poetry for reading and reviewing. I'm glad that it makes you think. I appreciate it a lot. :)

[MsJewel]

This is quite an intelligently written and though provoking piece. It's a pleasure to read your work.

:) Julie

[Jeannette Lunete]

Thank you very much Julie for this lovely review. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. It means a lot to me. :)

[ANM]

Life finds its own path it just takes us along for the ride in a state of non control... Enjoyed this some very well placed words!

[Jeannette Lunete]

Well, I couldn't agree more with your conclusion...since I was already drown into this state.
Thanks for the review. I appreciate it a lot. :)

[ANM]

You are very welcome!

[Latifa]

the wording here is spectacular, I loved itttt

[Jeannette Lunete]

Thanks a lot glorious Latifa. I'm glad that you love it. :)

[Latifa]

you're welcome dear :), I'll be checking more of your writings soon

[Pryde Foltz]

They call me Nono. My midwife's first words after the premier blink of my down-turned eyes were: "No, no."

She fainted down like a limp flamingo suffering from Stendhal syndrome when she first saw me.

Obviously I was meant to be a total disaster. Or just a fossilized museum attraction captivated for future generations of deadlock mindsets.

A very unusual but effective and creative piece. You have penned a piece of humanity often over-looked. Kudos.

[Jeannette Lunete]

Thank you very much for the review Pryde. I appreciate it. :)