happy little thoughts

happy little thoughts

A Poem by Alien
"

you can fly...

"
you swallow glass to
cleanse your insides
and make room for
clear cut crystals. 
holding hope out
in a dish for more
more high flying
death defying 
pixie dust.

© 2017 Alien


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Quite a dope little snippet of rhyme. If you NEED criticism... Then I would say tighten up the lines a bit, as in... Maybe rhyming Insides with "X" word to tie up the line, and so on... Otherwise well done. Nicely penned...

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on February 27, 2017
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Tags: fly, crystal, glass, pixie dust

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