the vapid and lovely

bored and angry, nothing of worth but poetry is supposed to be about emotion, right?

You're a stumbling fumbling child
with pretty words lacking context
and an pretty face lacking depth. 
You hold your head high as you
spout loudly with an air of intellect
that would only fool those without 
such an inclination. 

Its a good thing you're pretty.

Reviews

[grey.eyes]

this is so deep. i love it, well done!

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

being pretty and holding nothing, thats plainly wrong. Pretty faces do nothing but dust my shoes XD

[Bare Trees]

Pretty people do seem to get ahead even if the're fake and not all that intelligent, huh.

[mercy party]

this is good. it taps into resentment. a pretty girl in an ugly world, just my take on it. The poet didnt seem to stumble and fumble at all. Nice!