4:57

Drunk poetry yayyy

You're star studded and glowing bright
I'm sinking dark and holding tight
you have no cares and float in bliss
I can't sigh without a hiss.

Reviews

[Suhd]

Dark filled with mystery and envy! Good write.

[mercy party]

one could make the case that this poem is about a TV.

[Lorry]

Again, you kill it with the last line, which says so much more than the sum of its parts. The more we see beauty and light in others, the more we see our own failings magnified in our self, whether real or imagined, sober or drunk. Nicely captured.

[Darkswing]

That's a beautiful poem!!! Good work