Some help would be nice.

Some help would be nice.

A Poem by Alien
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Barely even a poem, just something I wrote once that often fits my mood.

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I'm holding out for better days,
but while I'm here,
while I wait,
I'd really love a drink.
Or some dust to take me through the clouds.

© 2016 Alien


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mystic through the days,as a leaf bowing high through the rain. Surviving till it comes down. This is how the piece felt. I adored it old times when everthing i so intense and the world rests,slower and slower. Keep writing! Please!

Posted 8 Years Ago


"Drink up, all you people. Order anything you see.The drinks and the laughs are on me." Yeah, we all need to bide our time somehow. Just don't keep your head in those clouds too long. You've got writing to do. :p

Posted 8 Years Ago


dont have any dust but i do have a drink.
hold on

Posted 8 Years Ago



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