11:11 PM

Something I wrote last year.

My breathing feels fluttery, shallow
moths pushing their papery wings up my throat.
I imagine my eyes look glassy, sick
melting from my face, 
colors melding like blue green gray lava.

Reviews

[E.Jay]

This is great. Has a creepy feel to it, I enjoy it.

[Davidgeo]

It's very vivid... and creepy.

Very nice to be sure. You do creepy pretty well with few lines; that's not always an easy thing to do.

[alanwgraham]

The time is nigh! You have painted some very dark and vivid images of a dark place.
Very well done.
Regards
Alan

[Ashwin Shanker]

Loved the imagery of the moths climbing up a throat

[😂]

ahahhhahhaha i love it! You're a funky one !