Your Angel

Your Angel

A Poem by AliciaB
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See? I can write uplifting things. :)

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I am a meek and humble soul

Within a tiny frame.

The world lies not in my control;

No power can I claim.

 

I am no sage of word or mind

Nor doer of great deeds.

My strength is of a different kind,

The kind that few can see.

 

I may not be considered much

In great and lofty things,

Yet there is healing in my touch

And refuge ‘neath my wings.

 

I know the sorrow and the pain

You feel when you’re alone.

My wings will shield you from the rain

And carry you back home.

 

I’ll hold you close in strong embrace

And wipe away your tears.

I’ll fill your broken heart with grace

And chase away your fears.

 

I do not know my worldly fate

In leaving what’s above,

But I care not what pain awaits,

For pain is part of love.

 

So by your weary side I’ll stay

And make the shadows flee.

And ‘til the breaking of the day

Your angel I will be.

© 2016 AliciaB


Author's Note

AliciaB
This is a poem I wrote for a friend. She is writing a story in which one of the characters is an angel who is trapped in the form of a human child. He is a fantastic character. :)

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hi alicia - i think in of us there is a angel whom we must nurture and never give up on - please do not underestimate the healing and empowering power of love and kindness, which are the greatest gift and privilege we could give anyone :)

best,
steph

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AliciaB

8 Years Ago

I will not forget. Thank you for the lovely review!



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Lovely poem for the child Character and beautifully written would make a friend smile with great joy either Girl or Boy wonderful works here.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AliciaB

8 Years Ago

Thank you!
Simple, elegant, beautiful and wonderfully expressive. The stanzas flow brilliantly, the love and care shines through every line ... Amazing, simply fantastic.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AliciaB

8 Years Ago

Thank you!
Nice writing, Alicia… forth stanza is so touching for me…. Thanks for sharing....
Best
Szhzia

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AliciaB

8 Years Ago

Thank you! I appreciate it.
SZHZIA

8 Years Ago

You are welcome....
Well now ... What I have stumbled into? ... Poetry Heaven? ... with Angels writing poetry ...
Absolute poetic bliss ... You nailed it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AliciaB

8 Years Ago

Haha no, you've stumbled into the brain of an adolescent girl... but thank you.
paperfox

8 Years Ago

Ahh ... heard about them ... that makes it all the more brilliant!
AliciaB

8 Years Ago

:) If you like this one, you should check out "Ravenhill."
Okay I guess this is your first work that I'm reading and reviewing... You truly put a great touch of upliftment in it which I really enjoyed... The power of healing a broken heart is one of the greatest abilities a human being can ever have... It is such a precious which one should never lose in any cost... We need people like that in the dark broken and selfish world... This is such a beautiful piece of poetry with lots of powerful thoughts.... I really enjoyed how you gave a nice flow to it.... Clappings.... Thank you for sharing this dear frnd....

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AliciaB

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much! Glad you liked it!
Love that first line!
Keep up the great work!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AliciaB

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
I liked it very much....
Beautifully portrayed....
Thank you very much for sharing

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AliciaB

8 Years Ago

You're welcome! Thanks for the review!
Unknown Poet

8 Years Ago

My pleasure
hi alicia - i think in of us there is a angel whom we must nurture and never give up on - please do not underestimate the healing and empowering power of love and kindness, which are the greatest gift and privilege we could give anyone :)

best,
steph

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AliciaB

8 Years Ago

I will not forget. Thank you for the lovely review!

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