I Loved, I Listened, and I Lost...

an old poem I wrote before I finally found love in someone else, but I wrote while next to the person I am writing to in this poem (My current gf is not the person I am writing to in this)

Is it cheating if it's love,

is wrong to have such

a deep urge for you?

I've loved you from the start,

you found a way into my heart,

yet I don't have the guts to say it.

I know you're in a bond,

but then why am I so fond

of every chance I can see you?

Your smile and laughter brings warmth to my eyes,

every word from your mouth is always a surprise.

You're funny, kind, and talented too,

oh God why do I want to be with you?

Aa is nice,

nothing against her

but it nearly broke my heart when you said the words,

"I'm in love with her".

I see you with her, looking all starry-eyed,

And I wonder if you ever think of me on the side.

Do you feel my longing, my silent shout?

Or am I just a shadow, you don't think about?

Still this fondness grows deep inside me,

hoping one day you'll turn around and see,

the ugly truth I've kept for so long,

I think love you, way too strong.

Would you give me a chance,

could I have this dance?

Even if we just stay friends,

just one moment, then it'll be the end.

Author's Note

This is really old, I do not have feelings for this person anymore but this poem was interesting so I thought I'd share

Reviews

[Manta Ray Lily]

Deep emotions and feelings for someone you love is really beautiful but it hurts when they don't acknowledge although they know that you would fall head over heels for them which shatters our heart into thousands of pieces. But still, we would do anything to make them notice our feelings. Lovely work, Alice. I really loved it!

[Alice Reiht]

Thank you so much!

[Landy]

Loved this poem, thank you for these beautiful words

[Alice Reiht]

Of course, and thank you for reading!

[FlaLover]

I'm sure many people can relate with this. I had a similar friendship. Sometimes I wonder how different my life could have been if only...

[Alice Reiht]

Thanks for reading. And like you said, I think we all wonder what life could've been like if only we'd been and stayed together with our lover.

[The Unknown Sith]

I like this it reads like raw emotions and thought to me. Well written.

[Alice Reiht]

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[Arundass TP]

Loving is one of the dangerous path one follows in life. A beautiful poetic touch to your fielings. Nicely written.

[Alice Reiht]

Thank you so much!

[Efxaris Arampatzi]

What a heartfelt poem Alice! It is so sentimental and really shows how deeply someone loves someone else hoping they would love them back. Wonderfully written my friend!!! (by the way I'm so sorry but unfortunately I am really busy and I don't have time to read the chapters you sent me through read requests, but once I do I am excited to read them!)

[Alice Reiht]

Thank you for your Efxaris!
And of course, take your time! It is good to hear from you. :D

[Dave W.]

Great poem, it's good to be free of those emotions, it's times like that , that love feels like a poison in the soul. Thankyou for sharing.

[Alice Reiht]

Of course! Thank you for reading!

[Beren]

Damn it feels like it was written with such deep and true love. I felt it so well. So honest and well written. mannn THIS IS SO GOOD I LOVED THE POEM SO MUCH! I think everyone feels something like this at some point in their youth, but for some reason I can't feel it anymore. I think it's easier to hold on to such loves when you're young. great that you can feel something... It must be perfect to be able to write both stories and poems.

[Alice Reiht]

Oh wow, thanks for you'r words! So much! Yes, young love is one of those strange things that we think will last forever but in the end, it was merely a figment of our imagination. :)

[Dylan Macadham]

Ah, yes, Unrequited Love, it's a special kind of pain, felt by most of us at one time or another.
You wrote it well :)

[Martiya Daman]

This poem is about someone who loves a person but can't tell them. They feel sad because that person loves someone else.

The words are deep and full of feelings. It shows love, hope, and heartbreak. The ending is sweet, asking for just one chance, even as friends. Beautiful, Alice!

[Alice Reiht]

Thank you for your lovely words, Martiya!

[Martiya Daman]

Your welcome, take care!