Chapter Eight

Chapter Eight

A Chapter by Alice Reiht

CHAPTER EIGHT

The next day dawned cold and crisp, the frost on the leaves glittering like shards of ice. Bramblepaw, Sootypaw, and Redfang set out early, the crunch of their paws on the frozen ground echoing through the still forest. The silence was eerie, as if the woods themselves were holding their breath in anticipation of the next chapter in their unfolding saga. They moved with precision, their eyes scanning the horizon for any signs of the creatures that had brought so much pain to their doorstep.


As the sun reached its zenith, casting pale shadows through the bare branches, they returned to camp with a sizable catch. Bramblepaw had killed a squirrel with a swift leap and bite, while Redfang and Sootypaw had each brought down a rabbit. Their prey lay in a heap at the entrance, and Bramblepaw felt a swell of pride at their success. She carefully selected two plump mice, their bodies still warm from the hunt, and picked them up gently in her jaws. These she would bring to the medicine den, for Gingerpelt and Pebblepaw.


The medicine den was a hive of activity as always, with cats coming and going, seeking treatment for various ailments. Bramblepaw felt a twinge of guilt that she hadn't been there to help, but the need for food was equally important. As she approached the entrance, she heard the low murmur of conversation inside. Gingerpelt's voice, calm and soothing, blended with the pained mews of a patient.


Pushing aside the curtain of leaves, she stepped into the dimly lit space. The air was thick with the scent of herbs and the faint hint of sickness. Gingerpelt looked up from her work, a tired smile gracing her muzzle. In front of her sat one of Honeyglow's kits, its tiny nose wrinkled in distress as it sniffled. The kit's eyes were red and watery, and it mewed pitifully as the medicine cat spooned a greenish pulp into its mouth.


Bramblepaw laid the mice at Gingerpelt's feet, her gaze flicking to the sick kit. "What's wrong with it?" she asked, her voice soft with concern.


Gingerpelt sighed, her eyes never leaving the tiny patient. "It's a small fever," she replied, her tone tinged with exhaustion. "Probably picked it up from the coming cold weather. But with rest and these herbs, it will heal soon." She gestured to a small pile of leaves beside her, which Bramblepaw recognized as the remnants of a feverfew and coltsfoot poultice. "We're just keeping an eye on it for now."


Just as she finished speaking, the curtain fluttered again, and Pebblepaw trotted in, a few clover leaves in her mouth. She had been helping to gather more herbs, her eyes bright with the excitement of her newfound responsibility. Upon seeing Bramblepaw and the prey she had brought, she spat out the leaves and rushed over. "You're back!" she exclaimed, her tail swishing with excitement. "How was the hunt?"


Bramblepaw gave her a tired smile, her body still feeling the exertion of the previous day's labor. "Successful," she murmured, dropping the mice next to the kit. "These are for the both of you."


Pebblepaw's eyes widened in delight, and she nudged the small pile of mice towards the kit. "Eat up, little one," she cooed gently. "You'll feel better soon."


The kit looked at the mice with a mix of curiosity and hunger, and after a brief sniff, it took a tentative bite. Gingerpelt nodded in approval. "Good," she mewed. "Bramblepaw, Sootypaw is waiting outside for you. He said he had something important to discuss."


Bramblepaw's ears perked up at the mention of Sootypaw's urgency. She nodded to Gingerpelt and Pebblepaw before exiting the medicine den. Sootypaw was indeed waiting, his fur ruffled and his eyes wide with excitement. "What is it?" she asked as soon as she was out of earshot.

"I found something," he said, his breath coming out in small puffs of mist in the cold air. "Come with me." He led her to the edge of the camp, where a patch of freshly turned earth marked the newest addition to the Moonstone. Reedkit's burial. The sight of the small mound brought a pang of sadness to Bramblepaw's heart, but as she followed Sootypaw into the woods, her curiosity piqued.


Sootypaw led her to a spot where the scent of the enemy was strongest. "Look," he said, pointing to the ground with a trembling paw. There, in the frost, lay the unmistakable prints of a dog�"large and menacing. "They've been here, close to camp," he whispered, his eyes wide with fear.


"Then let's tell one of the warriors." The she-cat hissed, tail flicking.


"But who?" Sootypaw asked, voice quivering. "We can't just tell anyone."


"Of course we can," Bramblepaw meowed, her voice steady despite the fear that gripped her. "But let's tell Foxpelt first. She'll know what to do." She didn't miss the flash of uncertainty in Sootypaw's eyes, but she knew that involving an experienced warrior like Foxpelt was the right call.


They found Foxpelt near the apprentice's den, her eyes distant as she stared into the mist. She looked up as they approached, her gaze sharp and alert. "What is it?" she asked, reading the urgency in their posture.


Bramblepaw stepped forward, her voice clear and strong. "We found dog tracks," she said, gesturing towards the edge of the camp. "They're close."


Foxpelt's eyes narrowed, and she rose to her paws with a fluid grace that belied her age. She followed them back to the spot, her nose to the ground, tail twitching as she sniffed at the prints. The tension in the air grew palpable as she surveyed the area, her gaze flicking back to them. "These are fresh," she murmured. "We must inform Palestar."


They sprinted through the camp, their paws skidding on the frost as they approached Sunning ferns. The clan leader looked up from her conversation with Copperclaw, her expression one of mild annoyance that transformed into alarm when she saw the fear etched on the apprentices' faces. "What is it?" she demanded, her voice sharp.


Foxpelt stepped forward, her voice low and urgent. "We've found fresh dog tracks, Palestar. They're just outside the camp."


Palestar's gaze darted from Foxpelt to the apprentices, and she took in their trembling forms with a swift, assessing look. Copperclaw's ears perked up at the mention of dogs, and she exchanged a worried glance with the clan leader. "Where exactly?" she asked, her voice tight.


Bramblepaw pointed with her tail. "Near the twisted tree."


Palestar's eyes narrowed, and she shot a glare at Foxpelt that made the young apprentices' fur stand on end. "Why wasn't I informed sooner?" she snapped.

Foxpelt held her ground, her tail lashing. "We thought it best to come directly to you, Palestar. We didn't want to cause a panic."

The clan leader took a deep breath, her eyes flitting between them. "Very well," she said finally. "Alert the warriors. We're going to need a patrol to investigate and bolster our borders. And keep this quiet," she added, her voice dropping to a hiss. "We don't want the queens and kits to worry unnecessarily."


The cats split up, their tails high with purpose as they raced to spread the word. Bramblepaw felt the weight of their discovery heavy on her shoulders. They had defeated one dog, but it was clear that the battle was far from over. As she hurried to gather more warriors, she couldn't help but think of the clan's vulnerability, the constant threat that now lurked so near to their home.


Redfang, though not fully healed, insisted on joining the patrol. His eyes gleamed with a fierce determination, and Bramblepaw knew that his experience would be invaluable. His injury had cost him some of his agility, but it had not diminished his spirit. He hobbled out of the warrior's den, his gait stiff but his gaze unwavering.


Bramblepaw stood close to him as they gathered the others, her paws steadying him every time he tripped or wobbled on his injured leg. His fur, once so vibrant and unmarred, now bore the marks of battle, and she felt a pang of pity for the proud warrior. His tired eyes bore the weight of a dozen battles, and for the first time, she saw the toll the years had taken on him. Poor Redfang, she thought to herself, her tail curling around his for comfort.


The patrol moved swiftly and silently through the woods. Their mission was clear: find the source of the tracks and eliminate the threat before it grew any closer to their camp. The tension was palpable, each cat's muscles coiled and ready for a fight. The memory of the last encounter with the dogs was fresh in their minds, and the loss of Reedkit still cast a pall over their spirits.


They arrived at the twisted tree, and the sight of the fresh tracks sent a shiver down Bramblepaw's spine. The scent of the dogs was strong and recent, and she knew that they were on the right path. Redfang, despite his injury, took the lead, his nose to the ground as he followed the trail with a single-minded focus that spoke volumes of his experience and determination.


Bramblepaw watched in awe as Redfang's eyes narrowed, his tail swishing slightly as he moved from one track to the next. His injury seemed to melt away as his instincts took over, his paws placing themselves with a sureness that spoke of years of practice. Sootypaw and Foxpelt followed closely, their own eyes scanning the ground for any signs they might have missed.


The trail led them deep into the woods, the trees growing denser and the underbrush thicker. The air grew colder, and the scent of the dogs grew stronger, making Bramblepaw's fur stand on end. Her heart raced as she thought of what might be waiting for them, the memory of the monstrous creature that had taken Reedkit's life still vivid in her mind.


They moved with caution, their steps measured and silent, each one of them acutely aware of the danger that could be lurking just beyond their line of sight. The path grew familiar, and she realized with a sinking feeling that it was the same one they had taken to confront the first dog. The very ground seemed to echo with the cries of the fallen, and she had to force herself to keep moving forward.


The sky grew darker, and their search for the tracks’ source soon came to a close, having no luck. They turned back towards camp, heads low as their hunt had no reward. Sootypaw gently nudged Bramblepaw, his gray fur brushing against hers. “Hey,” He mewed softly. “You look sick. Are you good?” 


Bramblepaw nodded, her words stuck in her throat for a moment. “Yes,” she managed, her voice hoarse. The cold was seeping into her bones, and the weight of their failure felt like a rock in her stomach. She tried to ignore the fatigue in her limbs, the sting of the icy wind on her paws.


As they approached the camp, Foxpelt picked up the pace, her eyes scanning the trees. “We need to be extra vigilant tonight,” she murmured to the others. “The pack could be watching us, waiting for a moment of weakness to strike again.”


Bramblepaw's heart raced at the thought. She knew the clan would be on high alert, but fear had a way of slipping into the shadows, whispering doubt and paranoia. They reached the camp, and she noticed the extra sentries that had been posted around the perimeter, their eyes alert and ears pricked for any strange sounds.


As Bramblepaw turned to go and hunt, Tawnypelt put a paw ahead of her and flicked his tail against hers. "It;s okay," He mewed with a smile. "You get some food and rest. And maybe see Gingerpelt, you look a bit pale." Bramblepaw nodded, turning back into camp and heading towards the fresh kill pile. *Do I really look that sick?* Her internal voice hummed, her paws clenched against the firm ground as she grabbed a vole from the fresh-kill pile. She took it to the apprentice's den and began to eat, her thoughts racing. *Could it be fear? Or is it something else?*


After eating, Bramblepaw couldn't resist the call of the medicine den. She found Gingerpelt organizing herbs, her eyes bloodshot from the lack of sleep. "How's Redfang?" she asked, the worry clear in her voice.


“He was doing okay during the patrol,” Bramblepaw meowed, scooching a mouse she’d grabbed over to Gingerpelt. “Here. You should eat.” The medicine cat gratefully pulled it towards her with a paw, taking a few bites before sitting back up and seemingly inspecting Bramblepaw’s face. “Let me guess, I look sick?”


“Only a little,” Gingerpelt chuckled, turning and disappearing into a corner of the den before returning with a clump of blue flowers. “You may have a fever, but this will help prevent anything too bad.” Bramblepaw took the flowers, chewing them regretfully as the sour juice filled her mouth. “Now, if you feel sick tomorrow, come to me at once. I don’t need somecat to be spreading a fever around right before leaf bare.” Bramblepaw swallowed the last of the flower pulp, nodding as she turned back out of the den.


The sun was setting, painting the sky with strokes of pink and purple as Bramblepaw stepped into the cool evening air. She took a deep breath, savoring the crisp scent of the woods, and made her way to the apprentice’s den. The fading warmth of the sun kissed her fur, and she took a moment to bask in it before the cold of the night took over. As she stepped into the cozy shelter of the den, she saw Sootypaw, his eyes lighting up at her approach.


"Hey, you," he greeted her cheerfully, trotting over and giving her a gentle nudge with his shoulder. His thick fur was fluffed out against the chill, and she couldn't help but feel a little envious of his warmth. He leaned in, his whiskers tickling her cheek, and gave her a playful lick on the forehead. It was a small gesture, but it brought a smile to her face, easing some of the tension of the day.


Bramblepaw settled into the warmth of the apprentice's den, the comfort of her clanmates around her like a blanket. Sootypaw curled up beside her, his fluffy tail wrapping around her for extra warmth. His purr was a steady rumble in her ear, and she felt herself start to relax. For a moment, she allowed herself to forget the looming threat, the fear that had become a constant companion. She nuzzled her nose into Sootypaw's shoulder, breathing in the scent of pines and her friend, before letting herself drift off to sleep.




© 2025 Alice Reiht


Author's Note

Alice Reiht
ignore grammar mistakes, I wrote this really late at night

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