Love?

Love?

A Poem by Alice Patinkin

Love, love, what are you?
So many objects claim your name
So many songs, so many games.

Love, where can I find you?
Should I look to magazines?
To the sultry movie scenes?

No.

Love, you are a soul
You are patience
You are kindness
You are the laughter of a friend
And the kiss of a child.

Love, you are here
In my heart
And in my smile
You are me when I look in the mirror
And see for myself
That there is beauty.

© 2013 Alice Patinkin


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Great poem. I love the rhyme scheme in first two stanzas and the mid poem shift.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this poem, plain and simple. There is SO much poetry dealing with love that romanticizes every aspect of it and a lot end up turning into ostentatious purple prose, but this poem is simple and refreshing and just plain pretty. Lovely!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alice Patinkin

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much. :) I wanted to show love from a perspective most people tend to overlook, but is .. read more

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Added on June 22, 2013
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Tags: love, romance, philosophy

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Alice Patinkin
Alice Patinkin

Virginia



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Hello! My name is Alice. I'm a Theatre major, English major and hopeless romantic living in the beautiful mountains of Virginia. Ienjoy writing poetry and short stories whenever I'm graced with the fr.. more..

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