Open Your Eyes

When a girl notices her surroundings, she finds it alot more beautiful then she realized.

fields of hay, mountains of grey

i climb a tree, i scrape my knees.

i sit and watch, just as i was taught.

i get a little lost, but i don't mind it that much.

as the breeze blows the leafs above me

i began to see a lot more clearly 

blue skies, with a sun rise.

the mountains of grey, now lit by the light of day.

everything changed

suddenly it wasn't so mundane.

the fields filled with greenery, there was so much scenery.

Reviews

[Gee]

A bit like growing up, as we age we see ,notice and appreciate so much more. For me the meter was a bit off and the "you're" in the title should read "your". Saying that I enjoyed reading your work.

[Alice]

I'm glad you enjoyed it, it was more of me trying to tell you that we often see things dull and ugly, when really we just tend to over look the beauty the world has to offer.

[Karmee]

Such a lovely write, so very beautiful.

[Alice]

Thank you so much kitseth

[Karmee]

no problem

[Musa Danyal]

this is beautiful! just, wow!

[Alice]

Thank you!