Light my Dark

about a girl getting haunted wanted her love to save her

The thing that haunted me in the night

the thing that distorts my vision and sight.

the thing that lures me with deceitful lies.

they are my demons, will you be my light?

Reviews

[Lord of mad men]

Well this is nicely written. It a short read that is very relatable. Yours truely a mad lord

[Alice]

thank you thank you!

[Lord of mad men]

I just accept them though there is no need to thank me.

[Alice]

its to late to take it back.

[Samantha Barrett]

I really love poems like this. It's beautiful so thanks for posting it.

[Alice]

why thank you!

[Illumina]

Ah, it's a very beautiful poem. It honestly touched my heart. I love how you ended it.

[Alice]

thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it

[Karmee]

like this a lot, and the meaning behind it.
Awesome write here

[Alice]

thank you :3

[Joshua McNay]

A simple question, will you be my light? This was nice. It was brief, but that works for this. Most of the time I write lengthy but you do a lot with a few words. Good job!

[Alice]

I like to write it short so it can fit on one pice of paper. Plus I don't like it out, I like to get straight to the point. Thanks for review!