10 Things I Hate About You.

10 Things I Hate About You.

A Poem by Alice In Wonderland
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Dedicated to someone special in my life currently. I think I've found something in this person that I've been looking for my whole life.

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I hate the way you laugh, 
like nothing is ever wrong, 
I hate the way you make me feel, 
just because you smile, 
I hate the way you make me happy, 
just because you're you. 
I hate the way you make me cry, 
when I thought you were true. 
I hate your gorgeous smile, 
and the perfect way you cut your hair.
The way your eyes look when you stare, 
and I hate the way you make me care. 
I hate the way your cologne sticks to my clothes, 
but I really hate how I don't hate this, 
Not a little, 
Not a lot, 
Not even at all. 
In fact everything above, 
Are just a few of the things that I love. 

© 2015 Alice In Wonderland


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Interesting turn there at the end. In a good way.

I hope you share poem with it's subject. It's quite sweet.

Posted 8 Years Ago


The thing I love about this is that it's true sometimes that we hate all those things, until we open our hearts and minds and so your ending is perfect.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Added on January 8, 2015
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Tags: love, cute, couple, relationship, teen, sweet, funny

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Alice In Wonderland
Alice In Wonderland

Winston Salem , NC



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