Hey

Hey

A Poem by † Allybear!!! †

hey um you like, When I stole your boyfriend last year I told you he was mine right?

Right

hey um you know when I told him I loved him it was all a joke right?

Right

Well, if you knew all that then how come you never took him back?

He wasnt right

Why, if he was tricked and decived by my beautiful looks and my hot bod?

That's not right.........

 

 

I am sick and tired of all these b*****s, thinking they are hot when their not

I am sick and tired of acting likt a ho I just wanna be a girl for once

im not inocent but I wish I could be for oonce in my life

 

Hey, Ima girl

Let me be one Please?

 

 

© 2012 † Allybear!!! †


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oh sis! I know your new to christianity, and im reallly really glad you are now!Innocence can eventually become a burden, not always but it can. Just because you have you knowed what and all.theres a name for it in which has escaped my mind but its to re-enforce your new innocence(: i love you lotz

xoxo
~a
100/100

Posted 12 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.




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Wow this is strong!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Hey! this is great, nice write:-)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Be yourself, a female, young, fun, yet safe, etc etc... nice write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

oh sis! I know your new to christianity, and im reallly really glad you are now!Innocence can eventually become a burden, not always but it can. Just because you have you knowed what and all.theres a name for it in which has escaped my mind but its to re-enforce your new innocence(: i love you lotz

xoxo
~a
100/100

Posted 12 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

love this and don't let no one take a being a girl from you

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Be a girl! Embrace the femenine fun and be mysterious and loving and friendly and all that good stuff ;)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely done

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Loved it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well spoken from a girl who is looking for her innocence again!! Unsually syyle but I like this modernish poem. Well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a strong write! It's filled with a lot of emotions that I'm sure others can relate to. Nicely done.
Thanks for sharing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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† Allybear!!! †
† Allybear!!! †

In Heaven With My Jesus! <3



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Hey I'm Alice, but pple call me Ally, or Allie-bear I am 14 years old and I love to write. Im kinda new to it, but its fun, so I thought it would be cool to try it. also my brother was JefferyQuincy .. more..

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