Hey

hey um you like, When I stole your boyfriend last year I told you he was mine right?

Right

hey um you know when I told him I loved him it was all a joke right?

Right

Well, if you knew all that then how come you never took him back?

He wasnt right

Why, if he was tricked and decived by my beautiful looks and my hot bod?

That's not right.........

 

 

I am sick and tired of all these b*****s, thinking they are hot when their not

I am sick and tired of acting likt a ho I just wanna be a girl for once

im not inocent but I wish I could be for oonce in my life

 

Hey, Ima girl

Let me be one Please?

 

 

Reviews

[Jane Doe]

oh sis! I know your new to christianity, and im reallly really glad you are now!Innocence can eventually become a burden, not always but it can. Just because you have you knowed what and all.theres a name for it in which has escaped my mind but its to re-enforce your new innocence(: i love you lotz

xoxo
～a
100/100

[Michael Leon Wilson]

hahaha someone thinks of themself highly

[Cassie Fraga]

ITS YOUR OWN BUSINESS ON WHAT YOU DO.... very strong in message. I dig the truth involved. thank you for sharing!!

[CHRIS ANDES]

typically true
=]

[AK]

Short but very powerful. I really liked it.

[Thea]

A poem filled with intense emotions...Really powerful lines...

"I am sick and tired of all these b*****s, thinking they are hot when their not"
Yah, yah, yah! I despise them... -.-''
I just hate those girls trying to act like their so classy even though their not...
I'm with you, Allie, really!!! XD

Another well done work!
:)))

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I love this piece. It is really strong. I know how you feel. Like really girls do need to get over themselves sometimes. They really don't need to do things. My favorite line was the one that said that girls think they are hot when they aren't. I know how you feel. Thanks for sharing.

[No name]

This was a strong piece, very powerful.I think a girl should just be allowed to be a girl and live how she feels is right. Nice piece.

[Missy Moooooo]

I love this poem and it is really nice to see people hating stupidity of others :D Nice jobb.

[¥Miss.¥ §M..]

Loved this!!! I agree.

[Gomer LePoet]

Deceit is not a trait of innocence and when we can look inside ourselves and realize that being true to our self is the only way we can approach acceptance.
others opinions or like a******s, we all have one!